Sunday, February 14, 2010

essay

yo, Walker and Sam, this is a shout out to my homies.
for my first concrete detail, I wrote how reverend Chasuble and miss Prism both have seroius jobs that there is no horse play in so people expect them to be all formal (social standard). for the commentary I wrote when Cecily tries to invite Chasuble on a walk with miss Prism but she says she has to teach. For how their true love prevails is how Chasuble still flirts by saying he would hang on to every worrd of her lips then tries covering it up for it by saing it was a metaphor.
For the second cooncrete detail, i stated how both Chasuble and Prism are of working class citizens and are not super rich to have enough money to do whatever they wish. Commentary for this was how Chhasuble and Prism walk and Prism talks about how working men shouldnt be single and how there are regulations but for the rich, they have all the money to do whatever they wish. Also i stated that jsut becasue they arent rich, it dooesnt mean they cant flirt and still be happy together despite the social expectations. The third concrete detail was how Chasuble and Prism arent expected to be together and like eachother because they are both sincere and rather "squares". Commentary consisted of when Prism chatises Jack's bunburying friend for living onlu for pleasure and Chasuble wants only to christen and read sermons showing how they are both all business and think bad of "fun". How their love prevails is how they still keep making little flirtatious moves to keep the fire going. yupppp basically that is what i got

2 comments:

  1. Good job so far. A side note you might want to wacth the spelling yes its ironic I'm saying this. Anyway I think you have good solid points we need to work on our transitions as a group because I think our thesis is a little shaky. Were all using the main idea in it, but we need to be a little more specific with it cause were each kinda branching of into our own ideas. As for your transition make sure you say all the things that your using for your concrete details and commentary are in your transition. Overall i really like what your getting at.

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  2. in our thesis we talking about satire imagery and how opposites attract it seems we are all only focusing on opposites attract we might want to find more examples of satire and imagery overall good job quinn good luck

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